A Hummingbird’s Purple Sugar Water, a Short Fiction Writing Prompt

Kimberly Burnham
2 min readApr 15, 2021

A 200 character fiction story based on real science.

Bob wraps an encrypted message on the tiny bird’s leg. Hummingbird trainer, he laughs at the job on his resume, but Bob is valuable. His tiny friend has just carried a message 20 miles directly to the target, eluding all tracking devices.

Hummingbird’s see purple plus ultraviolet. Short fiction writing prompts with Kimberly Burnham Photo by Steve Harvey on Unsplash

Science: “The researchers watched as wild broad-tailed hummingbirds came to visit, recording which feeder they flew up to first (one containing delicious sugar water or one just containing boring old water). The idea was that they would use the color of the light to identify the feeder on return visits. They couldn’t track individual birds separately, but based on some banding, they estimated the local population at 200 to 300 (depending on the year). In total, they recorded over 6,000 hummingbird visits. The tests showed that the birds could see every nonspectral color that the researchers threw at them. Color pairs that were closer together in hue resulted in more mistaken visits but still beat the 50/50 odds of the control experiments.” Experiments show hummingbirds see colors you’ve never dreamed of We see red+blue as purple, but birds can see purple+UV. (Whoa.) by Scott K. Johnson.

Hummingbirds see four colors where humans see three. Short fiction with Kimberly Burnham Photo by Zdeněk Macháček on Unsplash

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Kimberly Burnham

Writer, Poet, Ekphrastic Writer-in-Residence, Nerve Whisperer, Brain Health Coach, Author of The Traveling Brain: Illuminating Peace Poetry in 5000 Languages.